When we spoke of Brittany, we never used her name. Sometimes we referred
to her as Bryan ’s
sister, but mostly we just called her “narc”.
I watched impassively as she bent down,
struggling to gather the books someone had deliberately knocked out of her
arms. She looked weary as she straightened up and swept the long strands of red
hair away from her face. Even from across the hall, I could see tears streaming
down her cheeks. Sometimes I felt sorry for Brittany . I wondered how she found the
strength to come to school every day; how
she managed to come and face all of us. Yes, sometimes I felt sorry for
her, but most of the time I only felt contempt. She had done this to herself, I
reasoned. Being a narc at all was enough to ruin your life, but to rat
out your own brother….well, that was enough to end it!
What you have just read
is an introduction to one of my short stories.
The fact is, I've
written several such stories, each "TRUE", based on (MY) life
and from (MY) unique perspective.
Utilizing basic story
elements, (plot,
character, conflict, theme & setting), I articulate my memories carefully,
assuring my readers will not only identify with the thoughts and feelings of
the author, (ME), but,
also find her, (ME), to be the protagonist or good girl!
That
being said, I sometimes question the accuracy of my own stories.. For example,
at the end of this particular story, I wrap everything up neatly and
attractively, and must admit, (I) look
pretty darned good in the end....
But
then again, that 's only (MY) perspective. I sometimes wonder how Brittany’s
version of the story would read????
That is a different thought. It would be interesting to try to write a different ending from Brittany's perspective. When you have nothing else to do...
ReplyDeleteThat is actually a really GREAT idea....:-) I be sure to let you know when I attempt it. Thanks for the idea....
ReplyDeleteWriting stories is so cathartic. Good for you that you write, wonder and experiment. And that is some beginning to a story!
ReplyDeleteInteresting to consider a shift in the point-of-view in your story. I wonder how it would end then...
ReplyDeleteWould you write it again from Brittany's perspective? I would love to read your stories.
ReplyDeleteHave you heard of Splickety Magazine? http://splicketymagazine.com/
You could submit your stories there.
My story will be on their blog on Monday. http://splicketymagazine.com/blog/
xo
Pamela