“Fear is only as deep as the mind allows.”
— Japanese Proverb
It was time!
Time to face the very demons she's tried to avoid her entire life.
It will be hard!
Yes, she's forgiven them, or has she?
and will that be enough?
and will that be enough?
Her heart races, her gut screams,Be careful! You're treading on dangerous territory!
The snakes that are fear coil at her feet, their venomous tongues flicking furiously as they wait to be fed...
discomfort grows
turmoil ensues
turmoil ensues
her resolve begins to fade
But wisdom prevails
She refuses to be consumed...
not this time
It's only fear
"It's time do this", she says with a confidence she's never known, "We've got important things to discuss."
Dismissing her fear, this time she knows she'll succeed.
This whole piece is wrought with tension. Well done!! It makes the reader need to know what's happening. It leave me feeling unsettled and tense myself. Super well done.
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