Monday, March 3, 2014

Please Make Room....

                                 Please Make Room


                          Dear crystal white snow
              Your beauty long has vanished
               Please make room for spring

4 comments:

  1. So few words, yet so much truth here. My poem would read more like:
    Dear snow
    Get the hell out
    The end.

    :)

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  2. Great poem above and great poem below. ;-)
    I for one would take the spring but minus the birds. I hate birds.
    Great writing though....

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  3. Beat it Crystal white... and take your dirty, mud soaked cousin slush with you. Your poignancy has a greater effect though. Perfect. And I for one love the bird. :)

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  4. Oh crystal white,
    your crystals have turned,
    turned away from your wishes,
    into muck-devoid of you. I'm with you Darlene, bring on Spring!

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